ext_25844 ([identity profile] srsly-yes.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] menolly_au 2012-10-11 04:43 pm (UTC)

This was absolutely gorgeous and satisfying.

But it wasn't the superficial physical appearance so much, but the attitude that struck him. These were two guys who'd pretty much stopped caring what the world thought. Wherever their road trip had taken them, and whatever they'd been through on the way to here, it had left its mark.
This is a perfect transition from who they were and who they are now.

Greg took off his watch, passing it to James who slipped it around his own wrist. Similarly Greg's wallet and keys were given to James who tucked them away safely. Then James stepped forward and engulfed Greg in a hug,
What a wonderful callback to "Both Sides Now" with Greg offering his personal items to James as a definitive renewal of vows.

I loved Rick, and hope you're considering a sequel that contains more interaction among the three. *mems*

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