http://tanagramme.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] tanagramme.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] menolly_au 2010-07-23 07:58 pm (UTC)

Each part surprised me (in a good way). I especially loved the first (Quickly he swallows it down and waits for the pain to go away. - lovely last line) and the fourth time.
Thanks for sharing!
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