Fic : Visiting Day
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menolly_auTitle:Visiting Day
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Characters: House & Wilson
Rating: PG
Warnings:Angst
Words: Two drabbles of 100 words each
Summary: Will Wilson visit House in prison?
Notes - Written for the Seven day House challenge Day 3 : Angsty drabble. Except, it's two drabbles, but they are angsty :)
He gets as far as the prison gates, his steps slow and hesitant. Stares at the walls that shut out the world, imagining the chaos within, the desperation, the loneliness, and the fear. He thinks of him in there, wonders whether he's eating, whether he's getting enough pain medication, whether he's pissing his fellow prisoners off. He wonders if he's safe. He rubs his wrist, remembering the sharp snap, the flash of pain and then the deep hurt as House left him. If House doesn't care he shouldn't either. He turns and walks away.
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He's filled out the form that will allow visitors. Wilson's name was top of the list, he even added all his fellows. Cuddy's name went in faint letters at the bottom, a distant hope - or fear. Every visiting day he watches and waits, pretending that he doesn't care, that it doesn't matter. He's condemned himself to this, he's hurt everyone he ever cared about, they've moved on, left him behind. He dares to hope that Wilson is the exception, the lone believer, but Wilson never comes. Disappointed again, he turns away.
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menolly_auCharacters: House & Wilson
Rating: PG
Warnings:Angst
Words: Two drabbles of 100 words each
Summary: Will Wilson visit House in prison?
Notes - Written for the Seven day House challenge Day 3 : Angsty drabble. Except, it's two drabbles, but they are angsty :)
He gets as far as the prison gates, his steps slow and hesitant. Stares at the walls that shut out the world, imagining the chaos within, the desperation, the loneliness, and the fear. He thinks of him in there, wonders whether he's eating, whether he's getting enough pain medication, whether he's pissing his fellow prisoners off. He wonders if he's safe. He rubs his wrist, remembering the sharp snap, the flash of pain and then the deep hurt as House left him. If House doesn't care he shouldn't either. He turns and walks away.
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He's filled out the form that will allow visitors. Wilson's name was top of the list, he even added all his fellows. Cuddy's name went in faint letters at the bottom, a distant hope - or fear. Every visiting day he watches and waits, pretending that he doesn't care, that it doesn't matter. He's condemned himself to this, he's hurt everyone he ever cared about, they've moved on, left him behind. He dares to hope that Wilson is the exception, the lone believer, but Wilson never comes. Disappointed again, he turns away.
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Date: 2012-01-20 11:59 am (UTC)The fact that they both turn away at the end adds to the separation and isolation which I think you've captured so perfectly. Really great!
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